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0 in a cabin I guess by Mobcraft101 0 in a cabin I guess by Mobcraft101
Something I drew a while back. Yea, this is the drawing I used for the 0 reference sheet. It just feels like this drawing is...missing something. idk

Based on the rp I'm doing with :icon9fann:
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Honesty, it is a good piece, but I have some critisism/

First off, if you hold down shift in many programs, you can get a straight line. That would make for better looking floors, as they are waht seem to bother me the most.

I think Zero looks fabulous ;), however, I would recommend lightly blurring the background, as the colors seem very strong, and blurring them would make zero seem like the centerpiece of the drawing.

I think when you said that something is missing, one thing I thought of was the shadow. If you added a shadow, it would add a lot to the image, not to mention, it would make it look like she was standing on the wood, rather than what I see now, as it looks kind of like she is floating.

One more complaint about the wood: With the positioning, it looks like it is falling, where as if it was in a more forwards angle, it would make sense.

I like the arms crossed pose, as it is a lost better than some other drawings of Zero, as she is actually doing something.

Overall, good piece, even though it could use some improvement.

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9fANN Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student Filmographer
I really love the background. :D
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:iconmobcraft101:
Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student General Artist
Thanks :-)
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:icon9fann:
9fANN Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student Filmographer
You're welcome. ^_^
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StitchpunkGem Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
   OOO! Is she gonna get attacked by an evil force? Will one of her limbs become possessed?! Will inanimate objects suddenly start laughing at her?!?
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student General Artist
Probably not :-P but they are gonna have to find some machines that remain.
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StitchpunkGem Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
Do you know what media I was referencing all that stuff to?
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student General Artist
lol, no.
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:iconstitchpunkgem:
   YOU MEAN YOU'VE NEVER SEEN "EVIL DEAD 2"??!! If you haven't, then you need to watch it! It's creepy and funny at the same time, it's over the top, and it's the perfect film for Halloween. Also see its sequel, "Army of Darkness". It's hilarious and Halloweeny as well.
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Student General Artist
I'll add it to my watch list.
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StitchpunkGem Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
YES!! You won't regret this! Also, I see somebody's faved me!
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EnderessYT Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
I've watched Army of Darkness, but not Evil Dead 2, might have to check it out :P
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