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Vintage Minael by Mobcraft101 Vintage Minael by Mobcraft101
Okay yea, I need a LOT of improving to do...Especially with the background. Ah, whatever. This is my first try.

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Katartri Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice lineart but I do say you work on your proportions, compared to the body the arm is way too short.  The waist seems a little too skinny or the hips are too wide but that's mainly because of my preference.  This is a great first start though and I see a great future to come.
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2018  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! I've always had trouble with proportions lmao. And the skinny waist/wide hips were intentional.
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Katartri Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! The skinny waist and the wide hips just don't really appeal to the style I'm used to, but I do understand that you were probably going for a popular 30's cartoon style. And you definitely don't have to change it.
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2018  Student General Artist
I completely understand that, we all have our different preferences! ^_^
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StitchpunkGem Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018
   I think this picture looks just fine.
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2018  Student General Artist
Thank you, friend
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mamitomoe321 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very good! you're improving for sure!
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Mobcraft101 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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