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Journal Entry: Sun Feb 18, 2018, 8:41 PM
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Like or hate Minael, I want y'all to read this entire post, cuz I need help.

You see, I've been having...issues when it comes to Minael. I'm satisfied with her personality and character traits, and she fits in with the 1930's style I love so much, but I've been having lots of issues with her design.
Basically, I feel like she's too...sexy. I try not to use that word, but I feel like I have to, because it's the best way to describe her, and that's the problem. I have absolutely no interest in making characters with tons of exposed skin. You may be thinking, "but why make Minael look like that?" Well, here's your answer: pure accident. I know that sounds like the lamest excuse ever, but hear me out. When I was designing her, there were plenty of things to put into consideration. I want her to cover a decent amount of skin, but I want more than just her face to show. I want her to wear a long dress, but I need at least one of her legs to show so it's easy for her to walk (not that the high heels help, but whatever). Things like that, and the result was what you see. But the design kind of bothers me for reasons I stated earlier. 
And here's the thing: I've been having troubles redesigning her. The main issue is two things: her figure, and her wings. Her figure can really only work with what I have her in now, but the REAL issue is her wings. There are things I've thought of putting her in, but then I remember that she NEEDS some of her back to show so her wings can be free.

Can someone help? Thank you.



Mary-Sue test for Minael

Journal Entry: Sun Jan 28, 2018, 8:35 PM
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Angel Oc by Mobcraft101
[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour 
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color 
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color 
[X] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[X] (if a female) they have large boobs (eh kinda)
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc 
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc 
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home 
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (Minael is an Angel)
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender 
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (0 found the surviving Stitchpunks and made friends with them)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy 
[ X] They look much younger/older than they really are. 
[ ] They are currently in a relationship 
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. 
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent 
[ ] They have hallucinations 
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul 
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts 
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name 
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga 
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something 
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live 
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy 
[X ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of hunters
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear 
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy 
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 9

Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[X ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Final score: 7


0 - 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6 -15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 


16 - 25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue
and finally.......I had no idea what a Mary-Sue is.

Something for fun

Journal Entry: Sun Jan 28, 2018, 12:36 PM
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(Found this on :iconink-lilly:'s profile)

.I will tag 10 users of my choice (originally it was "the first 10 people who comment", but I don't typically get that many comments)
. Next to their avatars, I will put my favorite three pieces from their galleries. (And as a bonus, I will state why I liked that drawing).
.Meh, originally it said that you should make a journal like this and tag the person who tagged you first, but only do that if you want to.

1. :iconfnafmangl:


26 by fnafmangl
The amount of detail in this is breathtaking, honestly. The fact that you can do that with what looks to be a simple pencil, my god...and the jewelry was a very nice touch!
Dance With The Devil by fnafmangl
Absolutely in love this with this! I love how this takes such a random idea and makes something beautiful out of it! It also looks like it was drawn on paper, I was surprised when I learned this was digital art...
Dolly Corleone by fnafmangl

My GOD...how do you do this, fnafmangl? How? This is AMAZING!! I feel like I can reach into my computer screen and grab the glasses, they look so real! And the shading, and vintage feel to this...this is the type of image that never gets old no matter how much you look at it! Man, I want your skills!

2. :iconstitchpunkgem:

My Little Group of Diclonius by StitchpunkGem
Love the use of colors in this! The intended poses are great, and this little group is adorable! I'm also very honored that you added me in this, StitchpunkGem ^_^
Bittersweet Lucy by StitchpunkGem
This one is just so bittersweet (as the title suggests), I love it! I love these types of drawings! In all honesty, my favorite types of drawings are the ones that draw your attention, the eye-catching types, if you will. And you master that, my friend! I honestly had a LOT of choices but can only choose three!
Comfort by StitchpunkGem
I'm very honored that you put me in this drawing, and the poses are great! This piece also makes me so happy looking at it...

3. :iconqueenstorm:

Just Zero by QueenStorm
I'm not just choosing this one just because it's 0. When I was going through your gallery, this one caught my attention and seemed to stand out a lot. I love the style of it, and the somewhat somber feeling to it.
Preview - How Bep and Pauline met by QueenStorm

There's nothing more to say, it has the good boi BEP!
Christmas Gifts - Butt-er by QueenStorm
This one is the type of eye-catching art that I love! I love the color scheme and the shading! I also like the pose of the character!

4. :icon9fann:

Tears Within The Heart by 9fANN
This drawing is just beautiful to me! The sad tone to it really shows, and it looks very nice!
Birthday Wishes by 9fANN
I love the poses, they look so well drawn and you're obviously good with side views! And this one is just to happy, if you ever need a break from the sad 9 fanart, just take a look at this!
Adult Faith (9 OC) by 9fANN
This is really, really well drawn! You did a really good job on this, even if it isn't colored. And Faith as an adult is adorable!

5.  :iconink-lilly:

Ramona Farwel in:Demon spotlight by Ink-Lilly
This looks really, really good! The pose is great, I wanna know how you did that text, and the ink splats looks great as well! It looks like a poster from the game!
You lied to me.. by Ink-Lilly
I love the drama in this piece, and I also like how it seems to have been drawn with a simple pencil!
Get to know the Artist by Ink-Lilly
(Pretty sure "Sailor-Moonflower" was your old username) I know this is a "meet the artist" type deal, but I still love it! The character, the shading is really well done, how did you do that??

6. :iconmarispider: 

two best buds play some vidja gaems pt 2 by Marispider
This piece is really funny, along with looking really awesome! I LOVE Medic and Heavy's faces, and I love how Scout is like "wtf" XD But one question...where's Archimedes?
Request art - Medic behind glass by Marispider
I know that this one was a request for me, but I choose it anyway. I love, LOVE the glass effects and Medic's face! Someone save the poor boi ;-;
Aeon and his dad by Marispider
This has a very good looking style, and the shading is amazing! I also love the somewhat Somber feel to it, or maybe that's just me.

7. :iconenderessyt:

Edieth, Falling by EnderessYT
The intended post is great. and the fact that you drew this in paint....unlike your other paint drawings, you have to actually zoom in to see the pixels, which is surprising. I thought this was drawn with Medibang when I first saw this!
Happy Birthday Edieth! by EnderessYT
Look at that kawaii face...there is nothing more to say.
Edieth Christmas by EnderessYT
For the 1,000,000th time, this is very eye-catching, I love the colors and the shading! And Edieth is so cute!

8. :iconzgd-raiko:

Daughter and Ink Dad by ZGD-Raiko
(aaah for some reason DA won't let me use this one in full size so I had to do it myself)
This drawing brings back way to many good memories, plus it looks very nice! Sammy and his ink daughter are so happy ^_^
You are pathetic (with coulour) by ZGD-Raiko
This one looks amazing, I love how it's just black and white, it gives off very creepy vibes and is overall very well drawn!
FUCK.THIS.PLACE. by ZGD-Raiko
The girl is very A N G E R Y xD she does look very mad, though (who wouldn't) and the backgrounds, the cutouts, everything looks so amazing! Teach me, ink daughter!

9.  :iconchloexrascalfangirl:

Jetra Comic Oneshot Anyone? |Minecraft Story Mode  by ChloeXRascalFanGirl

SO CUUUUUUUUUTE!!! I may not be Big on Minecraft Story mode, but man this is awesome! And the lighting and colors are BEAUTIFUL!
Reika Clothes Swap!! by ChloeXRascalFanGirl
(Ah man, this brings back memories!) I love Reika's face, she may not be happy to wear that outfit xD but whatever, Joker's probably very, very happy...
Bendy Round The Corner | BATIM by ChloeXRascalFanGirl
LOVE Bendy's expression, and the lighting is amazing! This piece has a sad feel to it, I like it!

10. :iconanimated-love:

The Adventures of Arty and Rain by Animated-Love
Man, I LOVE this style, and the designs of the characters are great!
MAKE IT STOP by Animated-Love
I love the drama in this piece, it's quite spooky...I also like how there's no lineart!
Connecting With Nature by Animated-Love
Love the art style to this, and Bendy is just too adorable!




Ah I'm super tired while writing this :-P XD You can something like this if you want, idk. 

And for some people, they had tons and tons and tons of submissions, and choosing only three was quite difficult...

Clarification (regarding my art)

Journal Entry: Tue Jan 23, 2018, 8:20 PM
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(Choosing this journal skin because I like it, hush.)

Okay, so I've been noticing some things. I've been getting a bit more attention since drawing for BATIM and Cuphead, and by a little more attention, I mean a lot more attention. I have over 5,500 page views (which is awesome, by the way), and I've also noticed increases in watchers, favorites, views, and downloads. It's getting to a point where I need to make this clarification. If you see that someone has reposted my art elsewhere on the internet, ONLY take action against said user if they are taking credit for my work.  You see, many people like to bug people if they post things they happened to not draw on places like Google+, Instagram, (especially) twitter, and lots of other websites that aren't built for sharing art. In my opinion, the people posting the drawings are perfectly okay as long as they aren't stealing/taking credit for the artists work. 
I'm trying not to get ahead of myself since even with the increase of attention, I'm not exactly a popular user. But I have stumbled across people reposting my old FNAF drawings that have long since been deleted from my DA (which is fine, by the way, nobody stole anything), so I just thought I'd say that. Plus, the increase in downloads on some of my pictures sort of speaks to me.

BATIM AU: Introduction (11/27/17)

Journal Entry: Mon Nov 27, 2017, 5:48 PM
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Hello everyone!
For the past few days, I've been excitedly talking about my Bendy and the Ink Machine AU. But exactly is it?
As of right now, we only have three out of five chapters of the game out. What I do while I wait for the chapters is come up with my own exclamations for the story and what happens. Some things are predictions of what I think will happen, others are just fragments of my own twisted imagination.
When a new chapter comes out, I make changes to my AU and remove whatever is conflicting with the game's canon. But even after the game is completed, I'm not trashing this AU. The ideas and the characters are very special to me, and I've been working on this since not long after chapter two was released (around when I got into the game). It'll just be different. This will always exist.
Oh, and the thing I like the most about this AU is the characters. I take what we already know about the characters, and add onto them. I look into what they say in the tapes, how they talk, etc..and further develop their personalities. I even give them their own backstories, and lots of them are sad because I have a dark imagination. The only character I'm having trouble with is Henry. From both a writers perspective and a fans perspective, Henry is a great character. But he's so eerily calm in situations where most people would be scared out of their minds, so he's kind of difficult to work with. I've thought about making him a man who feels no emotions but decided not to go with that idea for several reasons (it conflicts with certain things I have created, there is not much evidence to support it (being calm doesn't really mean you feel nothing), etc...).
Each character and certain story elements are going to get their own journals, and I'm both scared and excited to share all this with you guys. I feel like people are going to judge it behind my back, but I don't wanna keep this in my head forever. I hope you enjoy it.


You know, there's something I've wanted to say for a long time now...

I just have to thank everyone. Everyone who favorites my art, every last one of my watchers, just...thank you. If it weren't for this amazing community, I would have left this site a while ago. But I've gotten so much support on here, and thanks to that my art is getting better and better.

Like...

Here's my first drawing of 0...
Zero (9 OC) by Mobcraft101




...VS my latest.
I'm running out of titles for these by Mobcraft101



Now, for some shoutouts to some very special people.


:icon9fann:

:iconfnafmangl:

:icongameraider100:

:iconstitchpunkgem:

:iconzgd-raiko:

And there are so many more, but those are just some shouts I needed to add. These people have been so good to me, and I really do appreciate it.

Thank you all for making my experience on Deviantart a pleasant one.
If you have any questions for 0, ask them. She will answer.
Zero by Mobcraft101
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour 
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color 
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color 
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (sort of)
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc 
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc 
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[X] They ran away from home 
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender 
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (0 found the surviving Stitchpunks and made friends with them)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy 
[X] They look much younger/older than they really are. 
[ ] They are currently in a relationship (in my RP with 9fANN, there's going to be a relationship between 0 and 1 because I ship them)
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. 
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent 
[ ] They have hallucinations 
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[X] They have a 'special type' of soul (she's a ragdoll with a human soul, I guess that counts)
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts 
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name 
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga 
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something 
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live 
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy 
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of hunters
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear 
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy 
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 8

Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Final score: 7


0 - 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6 -15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 


16 - 25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue
and finally.......I had no idea what a Mary-Sue is.
why did I waste about a half an hour of my time editing a picture of 8 and then editing the meme template for this trash

Meme1 by Mobcraft101

1 by Mobcraft101

Meme2 by Mobcraft101

Shoot me in the head plz
I'm honestly ashamed to be a Rick and Morty fan right now. Why would you throw fits, start riots, and yell at McDonald's employees OVER SAUCE??
It's not the employee's faults at all. And there were warnings of the sauce being EXTREMELY limited. Every time I think this situation can't get any stupider, I'm proven wrong!
I couldn't live without this information, guys!Visitors by Mobcraft101
I mean, I know there was that whole "deviantart corrupt terms of service" thing, but I mean idk what they would even use my art for, sooo....yea.
Alright everyone, chill. I'm not leaving Devintart. I am, however, cleaning up my gallery and will no longer be posting art here. (My google+ page, linked below, will have more info to why I am doing this). I will still favorite and comment on things, and I will still offer commissions (if you'd like to do one look at my widget and journal for that), but I will not be posting here anymore.
My Google+ post to why I am doing this: plus.google.com/u/0/+VickyBerg…